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"I can see a scene in my mind as I listen to this.."
I'm all alone...the Virus has infected everyone: Men, Women...even Children. No one was spared...except me. My only defense aginst the now midless dead that my friends and neighbors have become is my Dad's Desert Eagle.
I make my way though the empty streets...moving from shadow to shadow; all around me blood and half eaten corpses of those who were spared the Virus only to be eaten alive by the people they once knew.
I round the last corner and I see the object of my search. my dojo. Inside I have swords, staves, spears, throwing stars/knives, and more ammo; I'm down to my last two rounds. If I get get inside I can obtain a few more weapons, reload my gun--as well as take all the ammo I need for any unforseen emergencies--then get the hell out of this God forsaken town.
I run from the shadows...closing the distance to my dojo. Then I hear it...the mindless moaning of the undead. I turn...there are at least 100 of them all looking at me, unearthly hunger in their eyes.
"Food." One of them moans as they begin to shuffle toward me. I take out the nearest 2 with clean shots right between the eyes...now I have a 20 yard dash to my dojo...I have get inside before I become just another half eaten corpse left to rot...
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Haha this review is awesome! Thanks so much! (:
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Merrick Kuei boards the boat; limping, wounded from his hard fought battles. as he reached the deck of the ship every hand aboard salutes him he simply nods and the Captain gives the orders to leave, but before he does Merrick walks to the edge of the ramp he just asdcended and looks down at the ragtag group of 50 or so odd warriors who stood by him of the field.
One, a bronzed-skinned giant of a man that saved his life on more than one ocassion, stands in the middle of the group. His right arm gone, lieing among the boidies on a far away feild.
"I have fought many battles." Merrick begins . "I have faced both men and beasts...I've commaded great armies on both land and sea...but...I have NEVER fought along side a braver company than those of you that stand here today. You saved my life, and the lives on the men and women around you many times. I am forever in your debt. May the Light bless all of you."
He stand at attention and salutes them and they return the salute, no one relaxing his or her pose or arm until the ship disappears into the sunset...
Author's Response:
This is a pretty good story. Almost makes me wish there was a fiction portal here on NG. Now THAT would be an idea. :D This story is remarkably similar to the scene I have in mind for the next track "Farewell at the Shore".
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Amazing...totally amazing. That's all I can say. the backround drums in the beginning, the guitar, the piano, everything just melds together so well. You have a true gift to be able to compose this kind a music. Keep them coming *salute*
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*salute back* thank-you kind sir!
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Amazing just amazing. As a writer I can see so many different scenes play out to this piece. I can't wait to hear the full version you have coming out. Thank for submitting this to Nwegrounds. BRAVO to you!!
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Thanx! Any interesting stories in mind ?
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KICK ASS TRACK!!! Nuff said!!!
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